All Comments on 'Winter Coat'

Please make this into a series, I think I like where this could go!!!

Will there be more with these characters?

Does she change him? Ranger by day...huge Lynx by night. Not to mention the kittens she could give him.

I'm not sure. Wouldn't it be kind of lame to have a sequel for something low key like this? Kind of a slice of life with transformation?

It's a cute litte thing, but a bit too cheesy for its length. Had it been a bit shorter you could've gotten away with it as a porn story but I feel you were aiming for something more erotic. You shouldn't try to press those enormous amounts of emotion into something this short.

I found myself confused by the transformation's hotness/pain as well. I'd recommend working a bit on your descriptions, they don't really convey what you meant very well.

I liked the bone being the cause of her transformation as well - it's fairly original in general and very original on a site like this.

It was a nice read before school starts now, but I think it could have been better.

It surely deserves some expansion and sequels, werelynx takes away your favourite tail element though! But adds the best eyesight on mammal world plus your favourite loyalty theme from wolves (tha's why Lynx is allmost extinct)! Who knows maybe we can see also a litter of werecubs for the first time in your stories (still wait for those in change universe)

A wonderful story.

I'd hope for more but since this has been up since 2013 the chances of that happening are slim to none.