All Comments on 'Winter Dance'

I'm glad to see you back on the writing circuit. This submission was great. Very real; very sweet.

It was great to see your name again. I had loved everything of yours that I had read so far and I am positive this story will be the same!

I would say that, from this very good work, your novel is going very well. Congratulations on some excellent writing!

Such a great story. Hope we don't have to wait a year for the next one. Some people can really write while others pretend. you can really write. Thanks.

You've got me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I hope too see chapter 2 soon!!

All of your writing is good but this one is tops. please finish it soon. I see a great love story building here.

Having read this story again a few years later than the first time, it is still a romance story that captivates the reader.

A follow up whilst not necessary, would be nice.

Many Thanks.

this one was VERY welcome also. I hope they truly fall in love and look back on this time twenty years from now with wonder and happiness. Lynn

Reminded me a lot of high school days. Ev’s mother reminded me a lot of my mother, and the way we got along back then. Or more like how we didn’t get along back then. What is it about mothers of high school boys that makes them feel the need to be manipulative and controlling? 50 years later and I can barely stand to be around the woman. Oh, well. Nice story, thanks for sharing.

I just wasted a half hour that I'll never get back.

ok story I guess, but not as good as some of your others. 3/3

Really , really enjoyed your story, just wish it would have gone on a bit longer.