All Comments on 'Winter in the Mountains Ch. 04'

by ozland234

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Pretty good

Even though Zia is off of the seed, will she still actually be a whore? I thought that she was to begin anew. But other than that, good story. It's something new with a excellant twist.

ozland234ozland234over 18 years agoAuthor
Re: Pretty good

Thanks for your comment. Your question: "will she still actually be a whore?" What is a whore? Perhaps the answer is in the eye of the beholder? I hope she will answer for herself as the story progresses.

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
I know not the 'title' for Zia at present

I think the proper title is "under pennance" for 'crimes committed'? (I know not the local laws, but indication is that both whoring and selial seed taking are crimes in this land)...

That she is the Healer and medical orderly of the squad on the mountain is sure! We'll see how far the soldiers will use/abuse? her.

John

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