All Comments on 'Winter Wakings'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Beautiful

Just Beautiful.

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
This is a wonderfully crafted story

It is well-written and presents the reader with an erotic picture of a loving couple enjoying a treasured time with each other.

It is also going to confuse the hell out of the average reader, who justs wants to get their jollies off as quickly as possible.

This is great erotic literature. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!

As previously noted ... expert wordsmithing ... a very pleasant change from the "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" scenario so often found ... keep up the good work ! ! !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Gasp!

How to be turned on so gently that you almost don't realise it! Wow

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Seasons

This is how *I* want to wake up...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Slow, passionate, sweet & beautifully written.

Slow, passionate, sweet & beautifully written. A languid take on passion and love. It was beautiful.

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Creator & writer who enjoys the exploration and psychology of desire and concepts of beauty and love with a dash of kink. I like to explore uncommon themes and topics and often my stories are based on my dreams, for which I have keep a journal most of my life. Though I would...