by Apple_Leigh
It is well-written and presents the reader with an erotic picture of a loving couple enjoying a treasured time with each other.
It is also going to confuse the hell out of the average reader, who justs wants to get their jollies off as quickly as possible.
This is great erotic literature. Keep up the good work.
As previously noted ... expert wordsmithing ... a very pleasant change from the "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" scenario so often found ... keep up the good work ! ! !
How to be turned on so gently that you almost don't realise it! Wow
Slow, passionate, sweet & beautifully written. A languid take on passion and love. It was beautiful.