by DesireableLust
I like how you brought us right in and I'm looking forward to many more
I cannot believe this. I need more now. hurry up and post the next chapter please. I am eager to read the next installment. And any way to make the next one longer? I know how hard it is to try and find a place to stop and post. My own first post was only one page. lol
It could be a bit longer but if you post regularly length doesn't matter as much. Looking forward to seeing where you take the story.
I loved your first chapter it is very well written and I am looking forward to seeing how this develops. I also hate waiting for next chapters when I am enjoying a story but on the other hand it will be exciting to see what you come up with as you said you are writing as you go. Well done
I assure you this story has never been published before because its never been written before 5 days ago. I'm writing this as I go. Its possible maybe another story exists with a similar title or plot?
I feel as if you've published this story before? Im pretty sure I've read this one before. But I believe the one that I had read was left unfinished. Anyways good read, and I hope u finish the story! Looking frwrd to the next chapter(:
The only bad thing about reading new stories is that you have to wait before you can read the next chapter, which is why I prefer reading older stories. LOL But this was really good. I really think I can get used to Keenen, he seems sweet. And I can only IMAGINE what's gonna happen with it being just the two of them in those woods... Mmmmm
I am eagerly awaiting more to come as i feel this is only the beginning of something great.
If/when you finally have her become what he is please don't make her more. So many lit stories on werewolves have the female have more power then their mate by being..a witch as well or an ancient..I would just once like the female to be nothing more than his mate as an equal in everyway.
Just sayin' is all, but it is your story so I will continue to read and enjoy your offerings and look forward the the next chapter posting.
Willie
Hey everyone, thanks for all the comments and encouragement! This is my first time ever writing a full story for something so its definitely great to hear such good things. I've already submitted chapter 2 so it should be up soon its just up to the site to approve it. I know how a lot of you are worried about me not finishing it after such a great start but I assure you I really want to complete this so I'll do my best!
If anyone wants to message me with more criticism or comments, please feel free! I love to talk and I'm open to any suggestions!
I only wish it had been longer but I'll take what I can get. please keep it coming!
I can not wait for the next chapter. Please do not let us wait too long!
I am always uneasy starting a new story, I get interested and then the author stops never finishing the story. So I hope that you will continue this story and actually finish it unlike a lot of lit writers. My fingers are crossed you don't let us down as I already feel myself getting hooked on this story!
A very good story. Only wish is that it could have been longer.