All Comments on 'Winter with the Wolf Ch. 05'

You should try and make the these a atleast a page or two longer. I am loving it so far, just hate waiting for more! lol. Keep up the good work (:

Keenan might want to reveal he is a werewolf after his mom and sister gets settled. Its best to tell Mia now before things get more crazy with Eric. Its best to hear it from him then from somewhere else. Mia is going to be shocked regardless but it will hurt their relationship less if he tells her.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Love the last comment of being blindfolded

Before his family gets there... How will she feel being outnumbered?

Waited FOREVER for this chapter! Love it!

that ending was too cute! i already love them!

Please keep going!

A chapter a month isn't bad at all. I'd prefer a little more length but I liked how you moved the storyline further.

Keep it up!

I've been a fan since the first chapter & i completely forgot to check for updates these past few months. I was shocked & excited because there were 3 new chapters for me to read I can't wait for more, just please don't make us(me) wait soooo long for the next chapter.

I kinda wish they would have gotten the chance to be together before his potentially crazy family arrived. But I loooove the characters you've created. You really paint a vivid picture! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

You started writing again... love it love it love it :D

Really liking this story, can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. Please update SOON. :)

Great story! Update soon.

Love the story, keep writing! Update as soon as possible, please!

Hey there,I've been around since you started this story and for you to stop here? It's just...ugh...Can you please get back to work? I know you have a life and you get busy but...I just love the story so much.

-Sheridan

I try not to be snotty. but I'm gonna say I have decent taste in writing. It makes a lot of erotica really off-putting because I can't stand grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. That said, I thoroughly enjoyed all of this. It's some of the best I've seen and it leaves me wanting more.

Please do another chapter, or at least give us closer to your story. Great work and we all enjoyed reading it.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

I luv your story. Please write more

More please Dk t make us wait

This story is so good, the setup is incredible, won't you please continue it? It definitely deserves to be finished!

I really like how your not rushing the story. please update again soon!

I am dying to read more please update soon

when might the next chapter be out?

I love this. Mia is so cute. Well, Keenan is too. I can't resist a guy who appreciates a curvy gal. I'm excited to read more! :)

I absolutely love how you don't just rush the story and go straight to a sex scene. Please update soon.

That damn Eric! And I dunno about Carla and Tracy and this impromptu reunion. Hope it's not some janky ass beta ruse. I keep hearing Come Out and Play, which is janky ass ruse soundtrack for me.

Anyhoo, take your time but hurry up with the next chapter!

Please don't make us wait to long for the next part. Loved it

Do we get an ending or just another unfinished story,????????//

One star given for not finishing this story; no offense, but I'm getting tired of you writers not completing your stories.

Also getting tired of this writers on this site disappearing, no answers to comments either on whether there will be an end. Maybe Laurel should make a new rule, only COMPLETED stories can be posted.

If it was a rule that people/writers could only post completed stories there wouldn't be hardly anyone left writing

hey, it is starring to get interesting. where is the next one???

More please.

Please update with chpt6 and beyond the story is so good

Is this on hiatus?

I really like this story so far and I certainly hope to read more soon and see what else happens with the wolves and Mia. Keep up the good work!

Need more

Please give us more

The story is gettin better and im hook. Pls update soon. Dont leave your reader hanging.

Wonderful story, wonderful characters!Looking forward to more!

Oh blegh. Always the good writers. It's a phenomenon. Maybe it's the lack of payment. I wish I had lots and lots of money. Then I'd know the endings to all these stories. Contemplating selling sex. But apparently the going rate isn't worth the trouble. Nah. Killing people? Drug distribution? Oh crap. Not even crime pays nowadays. Oh well, let inertia reign. At least we get to be bored. And read half stories. And hope for writers to come back.

This is so good! Please continue!!

Great story

I hope that you find the time and motivation to continue writing

Thank you for sharing

CRW

My gosh I love this story...please do update...love to read this..

...please come back? We love the story!!

This is a great story. Please finish it.

Here for smut, stayed for the story.

More please

I know it's been forever since this came out, but I would love to read more of this story

pls finish this story 🥺 ur so talented 🥺🥺

Well you certainly have improved over these chapters. Your initial concern over structuring a plot is well behind you. This chapter is really well paced.

Seeing g that you have left this story for quote some time I hope it is to have gone on to further your weighting in some other fashion.

Really enjoyable story!

Amazing! I love the blend of hesitancy and confidence in both of your characters, and hope Donovan becomes an ally.

Please continue this story, and I hope if you are not already published, you submit this for publishing. I would buy this book to read over and over.