All Comments on 'Winter's Warmth'

This story is technically well written, however the premise is a bit unbelieveable. A woman, alone, letting a man she's only seen in town enter her house and bedding down with him within minutes?

Sure, only a story, a very erotic story, but let's talk reality...Care to think about STDs anyone? Who is this guy and can he be trusted? For all this woman knows he could be a potential rapist, a robber, if not a murderer.

I don't want to throw cold water on a budding writer, the story itself, if placed within either an established relationship or within a new and hotly growing romance, would easily help a series along. I simply suggest that this story needs more buildup, more character development, and a touch of common sense to be understandable.