All Comments on 'Wish Granted Ch. 02'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

GOOD START

Looking forward to more.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Oookay. So I don't think I will be reading any more of this story. It's confusing the hell out of me.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

I could not disagree with Anon (Okaaay), more. I found this chapter to

be more clarifying than the first. The first chapter ended rather abruptly, and was off-putting, for some reason. I felt like I didn't really want to continue, though I'm very glad I did; this chapter made it worthwhile.

If the rest of your writing is of this quality, it will be a worthwhile read.

Thanks for sharing your creativity, and for all the work it takes to put together a submission.

Regards,

GeoD

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