All Comments on 'Wishes Gone Wrong - Slut High Pt. 02'

by Razmagurk

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
lucky me!!!

i found part one yesterday and thankfully my horny ass checked your profile ☺️thank you for your work!!

Dianas2163Dianas2163about 4 years ago
Part 3...

Now I want to see part 3, the aftermath.

Who accepts the changes and how her life transforms.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Need a part 3 please!!!!

it was just wowww, i really nearly came just by reading this, please please please make part 3 of this pleaseeeeee. By the way the best line i thought was "the nose is connected to pussy". i really really loved this.

latinarita4latinarita4about 4 years ago
So good!

So so so so good!

Loved the scene where she turns back around to help her friend!

I wish it didn't skip to later in time - maybe we can backtrack and she can describe what happened in that time she was slutting it up?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Part 3???

I really want a part 3. I need to see how things go after her wish is changed. How's are her relationships? How's the sex??? What does Jean decide!?!?!? Sorry. Know that you're under no obligation, but god how I'd appreciate it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I feel like that Jake Austen conversation really happened lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent story 5 stars

You definitely gotta make a part 3 at least I there is just to much curiosity about the aftermath. This story was very smokin’ hot though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome

Nice and whacky. Gym class and Jane Austen was funny. Bit disappointed in the end when Jamie told how the week went, like a report. Liked to of read her experience of her first time from her POV after that build up.. Maybe in part 3. Chapters don't have to be in order. Sounded fun.

Think it would if been more appropriate to be set in a community college because of the under 18's at high School effected, or perhaps genie turned it into some kind of private School for over 17 sluts and reader wasn't told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Awesome job. Great character growth with room to expand the story. I could see the next thing being that the boys who chose to not to go back, including Jean, now always remeber having big fat cocks. Going from the being all girl in the wish verison of the world to guys, girls, and futas. Just an idea. What whatever you decide to do, I'm sure it will he great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice

Very well written. It is nice to see Jamie's growth and the mirror being held up to this fairly common fantasy. Being happy is important, but equally if not more important is choice.

I'm glad this story exists.

Though maybe a little more about the intervening week would have been nice where she finally fully comes to terms with her new self. I know she began the process with that blow bang, but it seems there was some additional character growth that happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please write a follow up!!!

Love the story! Please expand the series with more stories. Thank you

embjr50embjr50almost 3 years ago

Would love to see what happens next, can't wait for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Eesh, enjoyed it until he just.. gave in to the mental manipulation?

Presumably great for those who are into it but it just made me feel kinda sick.

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