All Comments on 'Wishin''

Good to have an experienced girl want to help out a shy guy. Sometimes the shy ones are the best.

That is a wonderfully entertaining story. I was almost laughing myself!

...I thought this was a fun story. However, why did you change tense part way through? It was pretty distracting. And how on earth did you end up with hyphens in the middle of words which aren't hyphenated? At least you only changed her name once! It would have taken so little work to fix these minor, but irritating, errors.

All I can say is MORE PLEASE!

Ended entirely too soon, please add more. ;)

I had a feeling from the start that this might be a boy meets girl love story. I decided to read a little of it to see where it was going. I have to say bravo, you kept my interest all the way through their adventure. It was a great story and I was pleasantly surprised. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us. 5 stars for sure.

Why so many hyphens? I’ve seen loads of grammatical errors in stories on this site (I’m even guilty of one or two myself because good grammar is such a black art, and nobody’s perfect), but hyphenating words that don’t need to be hyphenated is def-initely something I’ve never come ac-ross be-fore, lol!

It seems like I’m not the only bothered by hyphens. Hesi-tancy. Manip-ulation. Hyphens are only needed if the word is split at the end of a line.

This story takes us to a new place. Thus we see unexpected phrases like, ….” the madcap nature of their coupling”.