All Comments on 'Wishing'

No comments yet? What a shame. Your stories are good.

this was a nice intro 4 a story: I just wish it were more lengthy (I know - that's what SHE said, right?). There is defin8ly talent @ Ur disposal. Let us share it please. I was barely erect by the end of this tale, U see! Bah. The length is the reason that I scored U so low: Ur grammar & spelling were spot ON! Mechanically good, but not enough content. It seemed like the lady just dipped in2 the tub when it was done! Faugh. Keep em comin' @ us, tho. U DO write well, I'll give U that, NEway.

That was SO hot. You got me so hard. I'm wishing I was there to see you...