All Comments on 'Wishing for Redemption Ch. 02'

Really like this series...keep it up!

That shift was way too jarring. One sentence we're getting to know the neighbor, the next we're in ny. Ouch.

I'm surprised you didn't disclose any more about what happened with the three of them drinking. It didn't have to be sexual, it's just a weird meeting and we don't know what happened.

I also thought you wouldn't introduce the bad guys for awhile, since this throws a wrench into your whole relationship building between John and Hope, and possible other women. I feel like the story will move too fast now. Just my opinion.

Anyways great story with great dialogue. Thanks for posting!

Please I beg of u.... Please continue

I like they way you have handled what is a common theme here.

Its about the characters so far really. Good.

Always room for more so please continue.

What a waste of space. Another unfinished story.

Great start to a promising story but please finish it there are too many in finished genie story's on this site.