All Comments on 'Wispy Eve'

I’m not a gamer, but I am someone who enjoys dressing to show off my body, and the benefits that that brings, so I really enjoyed this story.

...not just with the reveal (which was foreshadowed in your comments), but in the way the tone of the story took a 180 and became something much more serious than a bit of erotic gamer humor. It's a tribute to your writing skills that you took the smile completely off my face in a matter of seconds (possibly because of my advanced age). This is a well written story. I hope a sequel is on its way.

Would love to meet a woman like Ashley! Maybe UAlbanyGirl518! Liked the story except the part about the father-daughter rape! Have no problem with incest per se if it's consensual and both parties are of age. In this case, however, that did not seem to be what happened. Nonetheless, the story is well done and earned the 5 star rating I scored it.