All Comments on 'Witches Brew Ch. 01'

This is a good opening chapter - fluent and fast moving. Looking forward to the next.

And he crushed her larynx with his fist, killing her instantly. Stupid, implausible story which belongs in Sci/fi if you're going to write about witches and hobgoblins. No stars for complete drivel.

I look forward to finding out what happens next! Well-written and exciting, this was a winner -- thank you. Oh, and ignore cranky nonny; I don't know why he insists on upsetting himself reading this kind of story. Five stars.

I really like this so far and I think it has potential. I hope you continue writing!