All Comments on 'Witches of Lust Ch. 01'

Generally am enjoying your story(ies), but the "narrator's" anti-lesbian / bi attitude is a turn off. Maybe she's not a lesbian, but almost any woman I've talked to would be intrigued by the lapdance and other things, even if straight. Also, many women experiment in the teens / twenties and most acknowledge the beauty of the feminine figure.

Thanks for your feedback. I would not say that Jeanie (or myself for that matter) are anti-lesbian, just that on the spectrum Jeanie starts out very straight and/or represses much of her lesbian thoughts. I didn't think if she was browsing videos and masturbating that she would stop and watch a girl/girl lap dance. Yes it was a let down when we come to expect every girl in porn to be bi or whatever. Irina certainly didn't expect Jeanie to be such a tough nut to crack. I did it to contrast with what is to come, and I'm sorry it is slow to start out with. Patience, and thank you for reading!

Good story so far, it’s pretty obvious from the plot (and the story genre) that this is going to get progressively more libidinous as it goes on, as are the characters in it, a comment re anti-gay sentiments seems a bit odd given it’s the first chapter in a sci-fi/fantasy themed story and the plot has yet to develop, but then I guess you can’t please all the people all the time….