All Comments on 'Witches of Lust Ch. 09'

you have done it again , i love your writing . i can't wait for the next chapter to read- awesome . thanks again.

I gotta say, I love this story, and the characters and world-building have been great. In the spirit of constructive criticism though, this chapter seemed a little rushed. It seemed to come out of nowhere that she's suddenly all about domination and lactation and having a comically sized dick. I'd just recommend pacing stuff like that out a little.

Anon, you're right and this chapter was in fact rushed. I had a lot of things about to begin in RL and I didn't have the time to devote to it. I'm trying not to let the same thing happen in Chapter 10 and I've been reading and thinking about how I can adjust my approach. That said, I did have a reason for the sudden impulse for domination, but that comes later!