All Comments on 'Witches'

Great read and very hot. I would have liked both more mystery and more enlightenment. However, any good story leaves a little unknown as you have.

I look forward to more submissions from you Lass.

Well written and well thought out story. Hope you do well.

moves right along, and the ending leaves the reader with a mixture of happiness for Adam, and sadnerss for the father. Excellent...hope to see more from this writer.

This was totally fun, quite hot ("Not that sheath!" *chuckle*) and I loved the ended. What man would go back, indeed! Talk about the Fates... they had it in for him. Or he in them? :) Really enjoyed this, CapriciousLass, looking forward to more from you! Good luck in the contest.

I cannot believe that this is your first story! My goodness! I loved every single lush (and lustful) detail, and I sincerely hope you won't hesitate to share more of your work with us.

Wonderful piece, and good luck to you in the contest!

I very much enjoyed your story though you seemed to cut it off there at the end. I'd love to know if you could write a sequel to it. And for a first story, this is amazing.

a wonderful story full of hot passion and steamy sex.

A very hot and passionate story. Well structured and almost error free. Great use of descriptive words.

Hope you consider penning a sequel as this does not seem complete. Will add too my Fave list ( you are my first!!!). Have too keep an eye out for more of your submissions.

Very well Done. I truely enjoyed this story. Very well writen. It just drew me in. I had to fight myself to stop and go get a drink. Please write the next chapter. I am sure it will be just as good, if not better.

Thank you,

Baribrother

A well-done, entertaining story with a fantastic opening line. Good luck in the contest.

different and well written...many thanks to my friend for the recommendation, i enjoyed this one very much...was sad for the parents being a parent myself but we must all let them go at some point and maybe if they had lightened up a bit the parents could have gone and joined the community with Adam and the girls and enjoyed life also....but..probally not...people with that deep of pompus unbending self of self just don't change. Thank you for sharing this with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Your story was so beautifully written and descriptive, especially the three women. I like that you didn't feel the need to explain everything. It was the perfect combination of a good story with good characters that was also quite erotic -- in short, it was great!

One of the best erotic stories I have read, descriptive, cautious and wild all in one. I hope you write many more, most excellent work, thank you.

awesome

this is story telling at its best!!!! i had to hold myself back from exploding all three times with adam. your a fantastic writter and i will be looking for more of your work. thankyou.

Your story was so sexy ... lots of great wording/descriptions. I felt like I was there for the whole experience ... so very, very hot! Thank you for sharing w/ us your great imagination!!

i absolutely loved this. i was hooked to every word. amazing job.

Great seduction, fine writing.

hooked on every word. beautiful descriptions and a thoroughly enjoyable tale.

Good story

Bad ending

Great story! I really enjoyed this... always a wonderful fantasy reading of a mortal man being seduced by a witch. This was extremely well written and I'd love to see more of your work, if you have any.

Wiccans are hugely misunderstood people. They are not necessarily evil and neither is witchcraft. This was a beautiful story and it highlighted what it's all about. Enjoying what nature has given us. It was erotic and exiting. Well done!