All Comments on 'With a Smile'

Very good ending was mundane and plodding till the end. Waiting for the next chapter.

Good story, starts the same as any old reclaimed ancient jewellery story but you manage to turn things on their head with that ending. Can't wait to see where this story leads to next.

see you again

Does the ring corrupt her as he was, or does she reset everyone back to normal and then adjust each to her own desires within semi moral perimeters. or maybe two divergent futures due to parallel universes. Chapter 2a with a smile and 2b with a frown..... I guess we will have to wait and see what the author has in mind. Whatever you do please continue the story.

Now that she's been under the control of the ring, just WHAT will she do now that she has it working for her?

O, please continue .

One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them[1]