All Comments on 'With Hungry Eyes'

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Jeff818Jeff818over 19 years ago
Erotic

There aren't many stories written from the perspective of a female voyeur. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wow, a writer.

I know; i have fallen in love with all the wrong things: the skill in writing; the grammatical sentences; the correctly spelled words; the pacing.

Of course, what brought me to read the story in the first place was the subject matter; and i like the unusual clever presentation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
HOT !!

I felt as if I was really watching him. Thanks for making him so believable.

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