All Comments on 'With Mother-In-Law on a Nude Beach'

I am lost for words.......found one, AWFUL

Awesome!

Nice start up but a very shitty ending. Your wife must be very unsatisfied if you always cum so quick.

Excellent start and Building the story. But you have rushed and spoiled what could have been a great ending to this story

Good build up but the ending was far to quick and forced.

First you started like he was telling story, then started giving her internal thought monologue. Stay with one person POV

Odd phrasing but good story sadly rather spoiled by too quick an ending, it was almost as if you were masturbating yourself as the story progressed and then couldn't wait any longer to cum. I liked the outline of the story though so try writing it again with a definite tense and a slower ending.

This is rubbish. Poor wording, shitty throughout.

And by the way, we generally use English around these parts. It kind of makes things easier to read.

Written like child with poor grammar skills.

All your stories are the same.....it's as if you refuse to use an autocorrect app or a spell check!! WHY?? The concepts are good, but there is NO passion, no eroticism.... it is like reading a dry report!!

But you warned us ! I don't mind your gramar as certain "Anonymous" put it!

Liked your story even if I agree about the quick ending ! Hot foreplay premature conclusion!

Anyway thanks for your work

One of the best stories I've read. Keep up the good work.😉

never again...'til the next time :p

He should have pushed her down her back rammed cock in her cunt let her scream so everyone could hear her.

:-)