by j3zza
Amazingly well written erotic story. I hope you'll continue to write about this pair
This was a hot story. loved the characters, loved the sex. I definitely enjoyed his initiation into gay sex, the air of mystery at the beginning was very sexy. Hope you'll write more
Another great well written incredibly erotic story! You are a master!
So enjoyable to read an articulate, carefully-crafted and definitely erotic piece like this. Well done. One of the very best!!
what a beautiful erotic story. so true and so believable. makes me horny
thank you for your wonderful story. I believe in a "happily ever after!" too.
I enjoyed this, the best, such a powerful story, so many parallels with my life.Just loved the happy ending. Great work.
I really enjoyed this story! Two young men that are finally able to express their love for one another. It makes me wish I had something like that...
this was truly one of the best stories ive read on here! i love it. i wish i could find someone like that.
Well done! I'm a sucker for romance, and "first-time" passion, and you captured that well with the fairy tale realization of true love where it always had been. Great pacing, erotic imagery, and a true understanding of what makes a very hot erotic tale. Would love to read more about these two!
totally great blend of excellent sex and romance. love the red speedos thing, very sexy.
this story is great, could use more combined releases and fewer sessions that come off like the top is using the bottoms ass to masturbate in. also, seeing how the boys continue to grow in their newfound love as they try to overcome the obstacles that would keep them apart (ie. distance, not living together, family stuff,etc. would be so terrific. the story needs it, and the characters deserve it.
This was such a well put together story. I wish there was more. This is a story everyone would love happen to them. To have hidden feelings for so long. It was incredible. This by far is my favorite erotic story.
I been with the same guy for 25 years. It was almost the same thing.When I was done reading it. I told him to When he was done.We ended up having sex just like the first time.It seemed that this time he was more excited.Because when I was sucking his cock and he started cumming I never knew he could cum so much.It was awesome.He just kept shooting loads of cum.I swallow every bit.And I asked him how did you cum like that.He said it brought back memories.I said I wish you could cum like that all the time.Then the next time I sucked him off he's been. Cumming like that ever since.So I guess this story really got him going.I been sucking his cock twice a day now and he's been shooting loads.He loves me sucking his cock twice or three times a day now.It really brought the spark back .Thanks. From a cock
Slut!
Even though perfection may be a single piece of art, or a single song sung to the right person at the right moment, this story is Perfect as posted here, That doesn't mean the world won't wish and dream about what happens next. This reader's imagination knows he can't fully imagine the days to come as well as "j3zza" proved to have far more talent, and/or real life happy experiences to make them appear possible and so real. BRAVO!
The perfection that feeling of completeness brings after being so well bred!!!!