All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 01'

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Irish_DomIrish_Domover 16 years ago

Excellent! More please.

marexotic18marexotic18over 16 years ago
ooh, I really liked this!

Can't wait to read more!!

Update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
This is great!

I have to echo the previous reviewer.

EmmSeaEmmSeaover 16 years ago
My score out of five is a six!!

A great read, well done! I find all the key characters fun and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Impressive Start & Recommended Reading

Author - your talent is on display and it is most entertaining. A little grandiose at times but could be toned down as you go.<P>

I look forward to your next.<P>

With High Regard

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love It!

Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
excellent read ....more

well what can i say except this is excellent and can't wait to read the rest.....more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
feedback

These comments are proof that there are a few of us left in this yuppy corrupted world matey ..cheers...Glen

Coolati_GeorgeCoolati_Georgeover 16 years ago
Friday Night in Sydney - eh?

At last a novel based in Sydney. Jennifer seems a good sort! Come on Peter swoop!

Reminds me of somme nights on leave in Sydney.

Please JA keep this rolling.

Coolati_GeorgeCoolati_Georgeover 16 years ago
Friday Night in Sydney - eh?

At last a novel based in Sydney. Jennifer seems a good sort! Come on Peter swoop!

Reminds me of somme nights on leave in Sydney.

Please JA keep this rolling.

ScotteryScottery12 months ago

Who the hell is drinking Fosters in Australia. Hell when I lived there you had to look around for them. Should have used VB or XXXX instead.

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