All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 09'

But I do feel that I am in a childhood fantasy.

Jenny, the top flight lawyer, should have immediately

figured out that he owned the car company!

Still she is very inconsistent in terms of sexuality.

From the first chapter I got the impression that she

was a near rape victim and was afraid of men.. Where

did she learn to wrap one leg around a man while kissing!

Another thing is that I cannot understand why Pete wants

to execute this new contract personally. He has much better

things to do with his Friday nights. Jenny is going to find

something to do and he is going to get very angry.

This story has drug on too long and moved too slowly. Both main characters behaving like immature teenagers who's opinion of the other seems to change at least daily. The characters behavior is too inconsistant for the reader to form any real investment in either characters actions or future. They both seem to have too much of a bipolar influence in their behavior. anon jerry