All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Makes my day

A true, thoughtful and passionate coming together. No crudity, nothing emphasised just a steady flowing of love between husband and wife.

Congratulations

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
with out u i have nothing

i loved this storty couldnt wait for each chapter and hated when the chapter was at the end . i hope this isnt the end but if it it is i enjoyed it very much

mabammabamover 16 years ago
Nice and gentle

It was a very nice description of the first deflowering of his wife. I have some reservation to her still having her hymen intact at her age and the fact that she has been riding horses and motorcycles since childhood... but I guess it could be possible.. otherwise a very sweet end to the torment to the loving couple :)

Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
See

I told you they keep getting better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Still deleting comments

I see the author is still deleting comments

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