by JAScooter
Peter is being kind really. Dingo will not have a chance to feel poor before he feels dead. John B.
What an amazing thrilling story you have written. Jennifer so innocent at one time and now so degraded. Peter seeking revenge - sends shivers up my spine - cold unfeeling killing to get back Jennifer. Can't wait for the next chapter.
this story is so far-fetched, so unbelieveable, soooo dragged out t... I don't know where to begin (or end for that matter... apparently just like this story).
even ifjennifer makes it out, Peter will be arrested for murder. and what's with the "oh poor white woman you are so virtuous" vs. the "boo arab sex slave traders corrupting this poor white woman." why do we never see a story about ALL of the white men (australian, eurpoean, and american white) who go to thailand and other parts of asia and completely degrade and corrupt the girls and boys there.
Why in the hell didn’t they rescue Jennifer from the nightclub when the lights went out?!! He looked his wife in the eyes, killed someone, then left. Bolt cutters, then she would have been free.