by MSTarot
... that in a perfect way shows the shortcomings of all judical systems. In this case even more so - does consentual sexual intercourse justify taking a life? Never. But obviously there were times when dumb-kind thought that was just...
Well written, good story development in a short span and didn't see that ending coming at all. Bravo!
Very well written. My own personal feelings aside on the subject matter, it was well written, good imagination to come up with the whole plot, a couple of things...yeah, that's my personal feelings. On the whole. It was very well written and got your point across. Now I need to go work out my aggression by chopping down a couple of trees then wash and wax my truck so I feel better. Nearly cried man....trying to break my heart?
Sincerely, Payenbrant.
From reading several of your stories, I think you have a lot of talent! I would work on your grammar (like where to put commas), but you have wonderful ideas and a great style.
well, that was positive nicely written tho
Soo good job I think tho not what I had expected