All Comments on 'Wolf Bride'

by Jessika_Thorne

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Enjoyed!

Really enjoyed your story. Am hopeful there is more of it. After reading this, I checked to see what else you had written. Will be sure to read your other stories. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wasn't Wolfie Enough.

I thought you wrote very descriptively and had some interesting moments that I enjoyed.

But I could use some clarification for characters:

Is Delilah a wolf too? Or is she a half wolf? Or human? Quarter wolf?

What is Uther like physically? Is he standing up right like a real man or is he on all fours like a wolf?

What is the genetic make up of their child going to be?

I think one great next step for this series is to do one where Uther and Delilah raise the child together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
surprised it didn't get higher marks,

Maybe because not enough back story, but the writing was good. but it's sad that the wolves don't stay with their mates. Sad for the mate at the very least.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Quite the gem

Stumbled upon this story and was very pleasantly surprised. It is very well written, it has a fascinating storyline, and it is a compelling read. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
really...

not a single comment feeling sorry for shawn....of course not following your instinct and having sex with younger attractive woman is totally justifiable(lets call her soul mate just be safe),i know its a fantasy settings and these aren't humans but its saddening to see all of you just ignore the guy whose there for her everyday,why would any man want emotionally invest on you...we should get rid of monogamy its a outdated child support system that isn't needed to day,for the record i get pissed when i read a story with a guy cheating on his wife and try to justify it too

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

Apparently Shawn knew what he was getting into when staying with Delilah. Even Delilah seems to be sorry for him, but Uther was apparently there before Shawn.

But I agree, the story could be more explicit about what Delilah is. She seems like a human, yet she is somehow of the world that Uther belongs to, though Shawn is not.

CHTechIndustriesCHTechIndustriesover 1 year ago

@anynomus from 6 years ago

I get the feeling shawn and her are living together, but not really married. A more “platonic marrige”. I think shawn might want more, but Deleilah is fine. He still cares enough to help.

If anything, thats the most beutiful part. A marrige of theminds, not the flesh.

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