All Comments on 'Wolf in Red Ch. 03'

so far so good. i would have liked wade to say whether it was another were or a wild wolf. who set out the basket? the person would have to have some other abilities to guess they'd need to stay in the woods right? it was a bit short b/c so little happened in the course of the chapter but overall well-written. Keep writing!

So Wade was able to rescue Ash and that helped her at least be willing to talk to him. I liked that Wade got lucky w/the first match on the fire. He is almost as innocent as Ash in this whole scenario. Being called to the Alpha is an honor until you're told you are to marry her daughter. And poor Ash not knowing her background. You have set up such a wonderful little "tail" hehe-he

I'll be watching for chapter 4! Keep them coming.

This is a great story but the chapters are too short .If you're going to spend

ten sentences on a 'matchbook' ,at least make the chapter longer

pleasssssssse!

Your words aren't misspelled, you just use the wrong ones. If you're curious about what I mean, I suggest re-reading what you submitted, slowly and carefully. Though / thought, a / as etc.

It seems like this is a sweet story. In all things there are people who come to a free site to berate. Just tell your story your way. Everything else will come together. As for the critic..., go buy a book. There are nicer ways to give advise. You could offer up to be a beta reader or editor as opposed to being snarky.

GET AN EDITOR, I tried, I really did try to read your story, but it needs to be edited, I'm sure you could find one through Lit. All the errors distracted me from the story.

This is a sweet story with an interesting twist.

Love it an not wait till u bring the next chapter

Get over yourselfs who cares if there may b mistakes u r ment to enjoy

Not criticize the writer if u don't enjoy the story or the mistakes

Buy a god damn book btw love the story I am looking forward to the

Next chapter

i really enjoyed the story and would like to read the whole thing

Please finish the story. Its so good!

Aw, man. I hope you can find the time to finish this lovely story!!

I love the story and would like to keep reading so please continue .53FE

I am enjoying the story and hope you return to complete it.