All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 01'

I like Cory's inner monolog. Hope more is posting soon.

If y'all do much cross country driving, a Buc-ees vast and clean bathroom is a welcome sight to behold!

Way too short!

Dayne, hopefully this is the same set of vignettes you started on another site. This site is more appropriate of a setting for your abilities. Your wordsmithing is much more polished and this story is much more than just about the sex. Don't get me wrong as your way of writing the intimate moments is unique, hot, and inspiring. It is here where your efforts will shine.

The other site is ok for stories that focus on sex and just the sex. It's body of works is useful for its purpose. But it can be like looking for roses amongst thickets of thorns.

Cody and Efrain's story is humorous, romantic, and provoking. Thank you for bringing it to this site for our enjoyment.

Chris in Rehoboth Beach

Yeah, this is Efrain and Cory. I'm publishing it under this name so the title all four PoV characters.

This story is friggin hilarious! I love these characters already. PLEASE keep writing, because I love where this is going.

I may be in the dog house as I submitted the first 12 chapters all at once. Hopefully, I'll get them approved in good time and y'all can read more.

It's nice to see a story that is not just one cum shot wedged between the one before and the one after. Personally, I prefer stories that are 70 - 80 % plot and 20% sex. Looks like this is going to be a good series.