All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I'm definitely not over rating your story when I say it's by far the best I've ever seen on this site. The characterizations are 100% realistic and it's so good. I feel like I'm Cory when I read this and damn if I don't wish I was him

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
NEVER THOUGHT

Never thought stories could be at one level when they start out and by the time they conclude, they would end up at a higher level. This story has done just that. It was a good story to begin with, but it has gone so much beyond that now. It is HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to show up. Loved it when I can read the daily chapters to start out my day before going to work. Makes for a good day. So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for sharing your story. Please keep on writing.

ACLASSYLADY

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!

Please keep writing!

AfrikanAfrikanover 8 years ago
Interesting

At first I was put off by the tittle, I still don't have an idea how it relates to the story but I have to say this story is awesome. You write great, it is soon good that if there are any grammatical errors I never noticed because I was too busy feeling and enjoying the experiences of the characters. Looking forward to the next submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Does Efrain...

Does Efrain ever blow Cory again? It seems like this is the only time he does but I don't remember in the rest of the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

That was actually fucking beautiful👏👏👏👏👏

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Five Stars burning hot hot hot

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