by dayne
I'm definitely not over rating your story when I say it's by far the best I've ever seen on this site. The characterizations are 100% realistic and it's so good. I feel like I'm Cory when I read this and damn if I don't wish I was him
Never thought stories could be at one level when they start out and by the time they conclude, they would end up at a higher level. This story has done just that. It was a good story to begin with, but it has gone so much beyond that now. It is HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to show up. Loved it when I can read the daily chapters to start out my day before going to work. Makes for a good day. So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for sharing your story. Please keep on writing.
ACLASSYLADY
At first I was put off by the tittle, I still don't have an idea how it relates to the story but I have to say this story is awesome. You write great, it is soon good that if there are any grammatical errors I never noticed because I was too busy feeling and enjoying the experiences of the characters. Looking forward to the next submission.
Does Efrain ever blow Cory again? It seems like this is the only time he does but I don't remember in the rest of the series.