All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 16'

I am in love with this story. I cant wait until Maddog thaws the Iceman.

You have outdone yourself. But I thought you would make the trinkets a little more interesting than what you did. I am waiting for more.

I didn't notice the tense shift the first few times i read through this series, kind of miss the present tense, but the switch wasn't jarring at all. Anyway, love this series a lot ( just finished binge reading...again). So yeah, good story pov shifts and all. I love me some pov shifts and to have 4 is amazing. Thanks for writing ^.^

This chapter had the hottest sex so far. Loved it. cp