All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 18'

Straight erotica focuses on women's breasts. I do not. Straight erotica focuses on women looking up all sultry while giving a blow job. I do not get off on the idea of a woman going down on me. If women made erotica for women, there would be more focus on what a man does to a woman for her pleasure not the other way around (and that would be better). But better still would be more focus on cock and chest and abs and ass and all the things about a man that turn me on. I get all that double with gay erotica.

I cosign 100% on what she said. When I watch porn, I want to look at dudes, not women. I want to HEAR dudes, not nasal, wailing women. Gay porn doubles (or triples, or quadruples, or ... you get the point) everything wondrous and wonderful about men having sex. Even tho it's porn sex.

Excelent. No more words. Is too much asking in Iceman-Maddog story that they fall for each other? Indie needs more than a toy. He needs to heal. And Preston needs to grow up.

BTW, I love Yaoi, and it's made for girls, as I know. And here (this site), I read only gay male. And I am a lady. I also write stories about gay love. Well maybe I am queer, and that is, but I have straight girl friends who really enjoy looking two guys having hot sex. No idea if is the same of the straight guys on gay female sex, I got the feeling is not.

congratulations, yours is one of the best work here.

Writing is simply amazing, so much so, I can actually hear the voice of my own dear old 'Preston' friend. Oh and that wonderful caustic humor and private dialogue.

OK, first off, to a previous commentor: "If women made erotica for women". IF? There is plenty of erotica made for women.

Second - it makes zero sense that I would get off on gay male porn, since I'm a lesbian. And yet here we are. I must be really weird. Or maybe it's because I love anal ;-)

Best. Story. Ever.

~straight female yaoi enthusiast

This is great, I love the line from one of the girls who watched Cory and Efrain going for it in the foyer, I think I came a little bit, smoking hot.