by TemptedAngel
This was awesome! I will be looking forward to the next entry!..Keep up the good work.
The first two chapters have been a delight to read. Looking forward to the next installment.
the story was awesome.plz do write fast.dying 4 the next chapter.
out of 1 to 10 in this story i put 10,000.when the hell are you going to put a chapter 3 yuh put this chapter 2 so long ago ats taking yuh so long
Wow! Another talented author. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
This is a good story! Can't wait for the next installments!
when's the next chapter? please update soon... i hope your not like the other writers who don't finish their stories...
I have enjoyed your story for the second time around now. I am looking forward to reading about the lunch date between Jake, Shayna and Monique. It has been 4 months since you've posted this last installment. Although signs point to this not getting an ending, I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
loved everything about it
pls write the next chapter soon
can't wait to read it :)
I enjoyed your story from beginning to end. So, when will you be finishing it?
enjoying this alot. I just hope you develop them as characters more...try to make it a long story. they seem to be great characters with great chemistry. Very sexy scenes. I hope you can develop them all...let us see more about them and continue their love affair!
PLEASE FINISH the story. It is really good and I'd hate to be left hanging. I hate it when authors don't finish a story. Please keep writing!
Gurl you so need to finish your work that you started. I like the fact the folks of your story are black. Its not every day that I see a writer after my own heart. I write were and vamp stories and my women are black or some woman of color and the fact that your writing as you are is very refreshing. Keep up the good work and please don't be like a lot of the other writers on here and not finish. Be stronger and better then they are and finish.
.................yes, yes, yes, yes. You've got me really hooked.
I have a feeling that there will be a set back when Jake tells her what he really is......ooooohhhh. Will he fight hard for her?
I'm reading on......
S.L
Killer!!!! Just plain killer straight out the gate!!! They are a smokin hot pair and I look forward to reading more.
Juicy......juicy.....aaaaaaaaaaah so deliciously juicy......
Thanks for the Saturday morning rush.
seems to be courting her so far. Good that his alpha relates to her submissive behavior thus far...
can't I write like you? Your note for detail and your vivid imagery are amazing! Will you teach me? You just became one of my favorite authors. ;)
yeah, right. pull the other one why don't you. he has shown NO patience so far.