by lilgirlsix
I can't wait to see what kind of solution Xylon has found for the dire wolf genes.
ha ha, mama said there'ld be days like these. now ya just know that cheryl is gonna go and do something to get herself in more trouble.....some people/were's just don't learn. now, onto gary and his minions!
Can't wait to see what her punishmentis is, I hope that it is fitting of the crime.
I can't wait to see what happens to gary
Wow!! What a great story. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.Very climatic.Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
It's about time Rhys killed that little fucker!! I can't believe Karen changed and she had such great timing. Rhys would have gone crazy if something happened to Katy. I sure was wishing Karen could have killed Cheryl though... Guess we can't always have it all lol One asshole down and plenty more to go! Keep up the great job =)
No questions were asked. No trying to talk him out of it. Just quick Were justice! And it put others on notice about their future should they step out of line! I cannot wait for the next one. GREAT JOB!!
I knew Cheryl would get what she deserved, I just didn't think it would happen so fast.That Karen was the one who realized something was up and follow her instincts, rather her wolf instinct was perfect. Her first turning is to protect both her friend a human and the pack. And what of the Council member who was evil? He lost his head. hehe-he And now Niklas is to be buried rather than cremated, I wonder if anyone else will step into his evil shoes knowing just what might happen to them.
Every chapter brings a great surprise. I can't wait to find out what the next one is.
Fitting end for Niklas.
Watch out for Cheryl! She is such a weasel pardon the pun that if she has an opportunity - she may supply some kind of assistance to Gary.
Kill her, now!!!
Ok, Xylon what is the solution. Quickly, tell us. Update needed - soon.
Thanks for this great story
vt
I love this series. It has a great story line with plenty of twists and turns to add to the mystery and suspense. I can't wait for the next chapter! Great work!! I love the characters and can't pick a favorite while with the exception of Cheryl and Niklas. :-)
*Falls off chair
So coldhearted Rhys....to kill him like that and just walk out? I'm so proud of you *sniff* .....so proud.
Girl I don't know what plans you have for this story, but i'm with you all the way...HUZZAH!
ok waiting on edge of chair for next posting....loving this story....go girl!
Keep writing!! this was the best chapter so far. The other chapters were good but you needed help and you got it. I love the swift execution of Nikolas and the take down of Cheryl (that bitch) and now she doesent have an arm??! OOPS oh well should have left well enough alone stupid one arm having bitch. Okay can't wait for the next chapter.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, love, LOVE that Niklas got what he so richly deserved!!! And Cheryl should have known better but she was too busy being a gold diggin 'ho to think of the consequences; so as miss farrahkelli so nicely pointed out, she is now a one arm having bitch!
That ending to metzger was better than I thought possible and now we wait to see what they do for Cheryl.
Will be better once they close in on Gary and his crew. Can't wait!!
No prisoners and No cremation for any of them.
Absolutely fabulous end to Niklas! I hope you leave Cheryl alive to suffer w/ her one arm and guilt she'll never mate. Stupid bitch. Any way feel better soon we need more chapters
What a great chapter!
Thank you for continuing tbe story so quickly.
I look forward to updates every day checking
Like a junkie. Lol
I love how rhys delt with that one! Goooood chapter can't wait for the next one!
justice is served i told you niklas was going to get his handed to him ih happy day. comgrats karen for kicking cheryl butt. can't wait for the next chapter i checking like fiened. keep it up. can't wait.
GO PACK BAXTER!!!!!! HURRA
Yeah!!!! One and a half (bitch who has one arm) down and so many to go.
Lets clean out the caves!
Good show, you go girl!!
Well, i'm actually commenting on the sequence, i haven`t yet read this one but i soon will. I love how you write and how you put these sentences together, it makes a beautiful story. I just love your story, at one moment its tension and the next its all soft and gentle, your a true writer. I hope you know that! Well, i hope you do, wait i just repeated myself again :l Oh dam, that sucks oh well cbb taking it of :D
Sapphire x
Cant wait for each chapter as it appears really gripping story have been hooked since Chapter 1. Look forward to reading more.
You know what??? Karma is a bitch and he got his. Always going behind someones back trying to cause harm so he got his just desserts. Cheryl without an arm she's going to feel like she can't live anylonger and be of use. So I guess she is getting hers now also. Ha Ha...punks
Such an amazing story. I haven't commented until now, because I wanted to catch up. Now that I have I'm really depressed, because I have to wait :( lol
I knew Rhys was going to kill Metzger... the douche had it coming. Although, breaking his neck was a bit too genteel. I love the story, the characters are so well written. This series is a great read. Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope you continue to do so!
What a hoot! Imagin, reading a Literotica story, not because of the sex, but because of the story. However, the sex is good also. You are a good author, with a vivid imagination. Keep up the good work.
... and I suspect that once they're dead, Gary, Paul and all of the current Dire wolves will be buried as well. Not sure about Cheryl though.
Well lilgirlsix you are awesome! I love that Rhys killed Niklas with his bare hands! At first I thought that Niklas was going to get Cheryl to try to kill Rhys but you surprised me. I wonder what will happen to Cheryl now. Maybe she'll tone down a bit but I doubt.
I do not usually cmment on a series util the end but I do make the odd exception when it's as good as this one is.
Lilgirl, you keep apologizing for the chapters being so short, this is not a problem when the story is as intriguing as this one is. I for one am loving it. I have also had an idea about humans who are unknowingly Were and are found by thier mates and you have done a good job of turning it a story...
Thank you.
Myassisdragin.
This story has kept me very interested. In the beginning I was a little annoyed by how every bad guy/girl seemed to be a jilted lover. Now that more characters have been introduced and more character development has happened, this is becoming one of my favorite were series. It's action packed but flows so well. There have been some proofreading mistakes with some names but overall really really good job. Like a bottle of red wine, this story is getting better with time.
Only in fictitious stories can I allow my own animal instincts to glory in snuffing out the of a life of a villian. Normally I'm a pacifist that doesn't believe in corporal punishment but damn that was hot how Rhys lept to avenge his mate! I don't even have any sympathy for Cheryl losing her arm. Funny how primal my reaction is when reading and don't have to apply reality and all it's implications.
Yeeeeeeuuuuuuuaaahhhhhssss!!!! Yes! YEs!! YES!!! OMG a 100 times YEEEEEUUUUUAAAHHHHSSSS!!!!!!!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!! THANK YOU! SO VERY VERY MUCH!!! YES!!!!! I agree with the last anon almost 2 years ago Only in stories and movies are where my animalistic side asserts itself otherwise I'd have no outlet and that WOULDN'T be good! So Again THANK YOU!!!!