All Comments on 'Women of Miklavik Ch. 01'

you are a good writer, but you are stuck in a rut- you have too many open story lines going- your theme seems to be degradation of white men, white women and black men, all simultaneously- the women are all addicted to black cock, the black men only have a talent for intercourse and the white men are all wimps who enjoy watching their wives or girlfriends have interracial sex- just end this story line by having the village invaded by a tribe of super hung black men who conquer the village, defile the white women, humiliate the white men- no need for parts 3 and 4 because that is all you can seem to write about anyway.

Story should continue with the tribe being invaded and conquered by another tribe of barbarian women

Very well written. ignore the comment about black man invading the village as that would not be a femdon theme anymore. Instead an invasion by another warrior women tribe sounds better who could then take up all the husbands as their petty slaves making them do degrading chores.