All Comments on 'Wonder Woman: The Power Trap Pt. 02'

by Sperman Alexie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Wonder Woman losing her powers if she fucks a man is the worst kind of cock-block. No offense the story is well written but that rule doesn't really add anything to it. No 'taboo' or danger just frustation. Would be much cooler if she and Supes discover that the curse doesn't exist at all (hint, hint)

Sperman AlexieSperman Alexiealmost 9 years agoAuthor
If I had it to do over again...

I'm not sure why I created that little rule. It definitely bound me (no pun intended) as I was writing. I left the story open for a sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
"DICK-OF-STEEL"

I realy think that you should have called tit that in stead

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Too bad the story ended fast I was expecting it to last kore and more , more superheroines falling and different seduction stories and I don't care about details people are trying to ruin a very good effort here, anyway great story wishing for more in the future similar to this or maybe a twist and Continuation

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It's true that the storie ended too fast, but it's a very good story. Poor Lorana could have a little more fun before the end.

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