All Comments on 'Wonderland'

I do not have much more to say than I love it so far. I am enjoying the slow buildup, and I can actually picture the characters' surroundings in my mind. Like where you left off also. Cannot wait to read more!

Good story. Keep going. But what Genders are the protaganists?

Some new NonHuman story that isn't bout weres or vamps. Despite there being quite a few good ones, there is too much, even of good things.

I'd like to see how you develop the story. Especially their relationship. Will it be in the direction of familiar/guardian or more just friends with benefits (not those benefits)? I wonder.

Keep it comming.

Don't you DARE stop there. I want more and LOVE the story so far. I was so into it I didn't notice the lack of gender references till I read the comments. LOL. I just assumed the human was female.

an excellent story; i cant wait to hear more. you did a great job of establishing the characters (apart from the gender issue, as mentioned by others). also, the tags are very funny.

i like this, as kolrin says it's something different then were's or vamp's. waiting for the next installment :)

I have to apologize about the confusion on the genders of the protagonists. When I wrote the story all I was thinking about at first was setting up the plot. But to clear the air, the voice in italics is male and the voice describing the monster (or the one doused by Exlax, whichever makes more sense to you) is female.

If it's any consolation, this story was the reason why I converted from first person POV to 3rd, lol.

Anyway, thanks for pointing out that issue and remember: VOTE!!

I totally agree with Kolrin & Riara - don't you dare stop! (& thanks for providing us with a little something dif to the whole were/vamp scene)

This was fantastic, I am envious big time that this is your first submission and yet, it was so well done! Can't wait to read more *hint hint*

I hope you are continuing this story. Very intriguing beginning, and I love the way you are developing the plot. Keep up the great work!

No I hadn't read this first chapter as I was beginning to work out :-)

Utterly fabulous start to a very interesting story. I love that it is so different and I managed to work out the gender differences myself so wasn't too distracted by that.

There is a wealth of creativity and imagination in this tale which I am so looking forward to reading more of.

Great job!

more please - and very soon please

I love this story. It would be wonderful if you made another story to go with this one.