All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 04'

You should soooo put this on wattpad if u haven't already

Nice story, keep it up.

wonderful. I'm enjoying it more than I can say. Thanks

Fantastic story. I love it. One of two of Lit's most unusual stories (handled by competent writers) that I've read.

The other is "Sacrifice" by Pandarus.

I like the way your female protagonist has some gumption - the last one like this I read, the female was meek and mild and would quite literally lie back and take it. And not just the fun stuff - her life became very dull. I would personally rather see some difficulties with relationships etc etc that you have started to do here. Nice.

One thing though - why not mention more about the size difference? I mean, if she comes up to his stomach, there are gonna be logistical problems here. Bed size for one, I suppose. Just a thought.

to post. Love this story and am checking daily. Thanks for sharing your talent with us - hugs. Kate

Yay for another story about gargoyles, I wish there were more of them. Looking forward to the next chapter and good luck with finals. :)

I love the way the story is developing. Question though, did they or didn't they? Coz you moved on so quickly they could have just made out. You are updating at an ok speed. I know stories here that have been left for months and months. So you are going a GOOD job.

your stories are helping me with my procrastination lol. i can only study for finals so much before i need a break. and then i found this! woo hoo! lol

i will keep an eye out for the next chapter

damn i want more *stamps foot*

knowing you got some importing stuff lined up i'll resort to impatiently waiting for the next chapter