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"Oh, Sara...well, thank you, I would love the pizza if you don't want it, but...I don't know if I could just take these from you."
"Please don't be a hero, Melleny. It really is frigidly cold out there. I know; I checked the weather. And you can keep 'em, but if you wanna give 'em back...we shall be having a second date, right? Really, I insist; you're not leaving without them. Sara has spoken."
Melleny chuckled at her third-person reference. She liked the hostess' sense of humor.
"I just kinda wish..." she heard Sara say. "...Not to impose too much or anything, just...I kinda wish I could have found out how your massages feel...for myself..."
"Welllllll..." Mel smirked flirtatiously as she put the mittens on, "We might just have to take care of that at a future point."
"Cool!" Then before she could stop her mind or lips, she blurted out the next question.
"D'ya do happy endings??"
Melleny stared at her with an unreadable, but somewhat amused expression. Sara realized what she had in fact just asked.
"Oh my God..." she murmured, covering her mouth. "That was over the line, wasn't it?"
Mel only smiled inscrutably. "We'll see," was all she said. "Bye-bye, Sara!"
"Bye, Melleny. I l—"
She stopped herself.
No! No longer a dream, Sara! Don't say it!
"...Lllllook forward to next time!"
Sara watched Melleny Alison Hayes get in her car and drive off. She almost missed her already. The beloved Starship song began playing idly in her head.
...Branded...my heart was branded while my senses stood by...
I'll never find another girl like you...for ha—
Sara's eyebrows jumped as she remembered what the next line was.
Wow, how funny...
She giggled mischievously, feeling her pussy tingle.
- COMMENTS
FranziskaSissy9 months agoA first date and the girls fitting like a manolo blahnik should do, so the next date will be just around the corner ….. lovely and this subconscious dream date was brilliant
Ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨💋
stroudleover 5 years agoThat was my idea of a perfect first date , I am a little jealous actually . Another dreamy dream sequence from you Smokey . Nice to see Velette make a dream appearance again . The chocolate game I am defiantly going to try that one out , a gentle way of introducing a blind fold and heightening the senses.
I would like to think of Sara and Melleny spending many more evenings together snuggled up on the sofa under a blanket , sharing a box of chocolates .
Lovely story of the start of a romance between two believable and likeable characters .
Thank you Smokey . Top marks and another in my fav box
JC
AlexPHensonabout 10 years agoHey Smokey,
For one, I definitely appreciate you picking a slightly more individual aesthetic for your characters. The fact that Melleny was "Deschanel-like" is a much needed break from the standard "blonde-haired sexy heel-wearing" archetype you get for most of the characters on here. Yours seem a lot more believable as people, while retaining a hint of fantasy about them.
Just some constructive criticism:
I don't think the word " 'twas " was necessary here. In modern literature it only rarely works, and a lot of the time it's for irony. Not really sure why it was used in this story. Just one word though, no big deal.
Keep it up.
