All Comments on 'Woodbridge Academy Ch. 01'

Amazing story so far. Well written. Eager for more

Top drawer--the writing as well as the story!

Could not stop reading. More please and soon!!

Very well done. Nice character development. I'm familiar with the area, and that was a nice touch, too.

5 stars and give us more. Thanks

Well written;awesome characters;sexy. Looking forward to more.

I really enjoyed this. Bravo

Loved it. Please give us more of this excellent story

I really hope you will submit more on this story ! I like the characters and it moved along at a wonderful pace. I gave it 5 ⭐️ And can't wait for more!

Great start. Love it. Look forward to reading much more about these appealing young men. And then there's the potential of DC intrigue also!

You have a real talent for dialogue and really do hope this is the beginning of a long series. Well done!

I was about to give up on this website till i found your story. You are an amazing writer. I just love this story so much. I just hope that Matt doesn't break his little curious heart!....please update soon 😃😃😃!!!!

Thank you for all your kind comments! I'm glad you liked the first part of the story :) The second part will be coming soon!

I really enjoyed the content of your story but seriously all the mistakes in it really made it hard to read. Make sure you use spell check before you post! Still 5 stars though!

Complete perfection!

Very good start and I look forward to more. As to the errors, I don't know if spellcheck will catch some of them as they were more grammatical in nature, such as using your instead of you're and such. I eventually just ignored them. As I said, I look forward to more.

Thank you for the constructive criticism, i appreciate it :) I wrote most of the first part on my phone, so some of the errors may have been contributed to autocorrect or simply overlooking them on the small screen. I apologize for that. The second part, which has been submitted already, was written in word, though, so I hope you find that it is more up to your standards! I will keep a closer eye on it in the future. So sorry :(

It's just a perfect beginning! More more more!

Funny. I was so completely into the story that my brain skipped over and ignored any flaws. I simply loved it and can't wait for more. Excellent job all around!

Definitely 5 stars omg haven't read a GOOD story like this on lit in a long time! You're a really talented writer

My first experience was so very similar. Brings back great memories and has made me SO hard! Thanks,

Scott

Matt Humphrey is a real sexy guy. Love the tenderness with which he comes out, and the smattering of hair on his muscular chest. In time he will develop into an even sexier young man!

Great writing! I'm extremely jealous of your skill, haha

Totally hooked! Keep it coming! :)

Grabbed me from the first sentence. Well presented, barring the few grammatical errors but that is just the English in me, I was able to enjoy this and can't wait to see how the relationship develops between these two.

A very promising story, I however was astounded that you would describe Matt as an "alpha male" type and then he behaves like a defensiv, bipolar little girl. He opens up and then he resorts to different forms of reverse psychology to get affection or some kind of reaction. I am curious how the next chapters will develop.

Loved this story's beginning. Can't wait to read more. Really enjoyed it. (Constructive criticism: you could have used an editor. Haven't read the other comments yet so someone may have already suggested it. Didn't hurt the flow of the story or the character development). You are a really good writer.

I really like the way this story is developing. You did a great job of introducing and developing the characters and describing the settings and actions. Very nice, I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you

a few spelling errors. however really enjoying a bloody great story ................................................... jonathan

This was incredibly hot, and different. Usually stories circle around a guy having a crush one someone else and not the other way around. One of my favourites here yet

Just found this story and it's really great...but...you really need to use spellcheck or something like that!

Best read Ive had in years.

I really wasn't expecting to find such a good and well-written story my first time on this site, and I'm honestly so impressed by this story that I registered onto the site for this. Bravo for superb writing, and I'm now off to read the rest of this series. :)

So far so good! Good start.

I was reading the tale so fast I never had time to notice the grammar! Since first signing on to literotica it's the best story I have read - by a long way. Now for the rest.

What an incredible story! It got me so aroused and I am thrilled there are tons more chapters on these two sexy athletic lustful guys! Bravo!!!

Damn, this was a hot read! Love multi-chapter stories in a series like this! I have grown to love this genre. Very well written & this just drips with lust & sexual tension! Can’t wait to read the next in the series.