All Comments on 'Work and Play Pt. 02'

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aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
This is a good story

The story is hottttttt!!!!!!!! I liked the way Zeke and Gab battle it out, but end up together. I didn't see Zeke just blurting everything out though. Please keep writing for there is many ways to take these characters.

wishiwere1wishiwere1over 8 years ago
love your style

this story has it all! Humor, realism and eroticism..... Please post 3 soon! I can't wait to read about Zeke's reaction when he's sober.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

humour and sex--have it all!!

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 8 years ago

I like Gabriel and from the minute Zeke carried on with him in the break room I thought he would be the one for him but a) Zeke needs to be honest with himself, Grayson and Shannon and b) ADHD is not an excuse for his attitude. He has to admit his fears and move on. If Grayson can so can he no matter his career goals.

PleasepleasePleasepleasealmost 8 years ago
Gabriel it is

Love the humor too:)

CocoPop1CocoPop1almost 2 years ago

I have a severe case of second male lead syndrome so I’m gonna have to drop this story before my heart is broken. Gabriel and Zeke are hot but I already fell for Grayson the sweetypie. Also ADHD isn’t an excuse for Zeke’s behaviour. Sure you can be scatter brained and stuff but it doesn’t make you react like an asshole.

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