All Comments on 'Work and Play Pt. 04'

I can't believe I will have to wait another 3 weeks till the next chapter. This story keeps getting better...I absolutely love your writing. I hate Clay already and I just wish Gabriel could be there for Zeke and comfort him...but then again, their complicated relationship is what makes the story so interesting...

Just read through all four parts. I love this story so far. Zeke is such a complex character. I feel like you need to flesh out Gabriel more as a character though. Right now he's just a guy who gives zeke good sex. So I'm not too invested in them being together. But that comes with time as the story progresses. I hope zeke stands up to clay though Or reports him. He's terrible.

Great story!

Do not make us wait. You are very talented

I would like to get to know Gabe a bit better. I would like to think Zeke opens up to him and give not only Gabe but himself a chance at happiness! I would like to think Zeke finds himself worthy of a HEA! Love your work, can't wait for the next chapter!!

PS. I hope Gabe kicks Clay's ass so hard it bounces out the front door!

Love it so far! Your characters and writing kill me and I can't wait to read more about Zeke and Gabe!

Also, I'm really hoping Gabriel finds out about Clays harassment and loses it on him!

But cmon kid, what Clay did is just wrong. I hope to hell he is punished and punished severely for his actions. I want Zeke and Gabe to move forward together each working out the others quirks. Most of all I want Zeke to be good with who he is and stop worrying about what everybody else is thinking.

Love your stiry. Please continue

very good story..zeke's character is well fleshed

Oh! How I have guys like Clay, no one should be subjected to such, he needs to be dealt with....poor Zeke he has to deal with this all by himself, at least he has sexy Gabe to esse his anxiety. Can't wait to see where will this lead them! Hopefully to an awesome relationship. Plz update soon, love your story.

For your compliments. Working on an update! It's awesome of everyone to be reading and being supportive of my little story. Thanks!

gives us insight to what he's really feeling and his emotions. not too many writers can unload in this brezzy, emotional self talk that Zeke does, so good writing there.

Zeke can stand up for himself but he's got to be better at those moments, like taking on Clay and with Gabe.

cant wait to ready your next chapter

Wish I could be looking forward to more

You're a great storyteller but boy is Zeke really unpleasant and difficult. Would someone like Gabe really put up with that sh*t from a guy like Zeke? That's where it suspends disbelief. Why Zeke still has friends that humor his odd and mean personality is bizarre UNLESS he grew up with them and they went to school with each other.

This is not how the real world works,unless Zeke looks like Matt Bomer or something...

But you can tell a story so I'll stick around but I don't have a penchant for bratty unpleasant and anti-sociable leads unless the story is supposed to be a la American psycho.

QOTC answer: I think work collaboration is a reasonable expectation. Some mild elevation of Zeke in the workplace at Gabriel’s hand. Nothing obvious to others. I think awkwardness is a certain expectation because Zeke is Zeke. It’s not lost on me that Gabriel went down on Zeke. I think that’s the strongest foreshadowing here, now. A story written so long ago but I’m taking it chapter by chapter in the late winter of 2022 …