All Comments on 'Work and Play Pt. 05'

Oh, too short...I hoped there will be more about Clay in this chapter. But it is good to know more about Zeke's family too so I'm not complaining. Hope the new chapter comes soon

They are falling for each other!! I wouldn't want to tell you what is next but I can't wait to read the next chapter..... Oh... Maybe i would like to see Gabe go all cave man on Clay and protect Zeke from him but that's just the overbearing romantic in me!! Love your work!!

was he being nice and sensitive or is it too gay for Gabe. Like the first time gay for Gabe twist, didn't see that, that leaves a lot of angles which this story can go. Sounds like Gabe is questioning himself, he like zeke, but can he love him and be with a man fulltime. Zeke could be in for some heartache while Gabe figures this out............

Waiting for the next chapter

Really enjoying this unfolding story. Gabe is terrific and if Zeke loosen up on control he could very, very happy for the first time in his life.

Yes! Thank you for updating, I love them so much!

Just loving this story so much, the journey Zeke is on and sorting out his messed up feelings about himself and others is just great.. Can't wait for the next thanks

Your comments are always appreciated. I'm glad you all enjoy this story and I hope you stay to see Zeke on this journey. Thanks!

I`m not doing comments often, but when I do: The story is absolutely amazing.

I am getting so immersed in the characters you created and I find myself checking every week if a new update is out!!!

Keep on going! I love this story with Zeke and Gabe and honestly... who doesn`t ship them?

Please keep updating.

Sincerely, your anonymous fan:)

One of my favorites. I love the writinv, and that there is substance around the sex. Of course I shouldn't expect that from a smut website, but it is great when it's there. I can't wait for a new update ahhh

I literally can't wait for the next chapter anymore. Love your work

pls update..or notify if u plan on nt continuing dis...

this story is a gem in literotica. Zeke is my fav character, his reflection and train of thought is so hilarious, yet I can relate to him at some points. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. Plz don't drop this <3

knock.knock/....nyone der??

Cum on be our hero101 and give us the next chapter, pretty please

There are two parts after part 5 and more parts coming soon.

great story

I love the characters, so unexpected and refreshing, with edges and flaws.

it turns me on

Zeke is not smooth, I love his bitchiness, it makes him interesting although he is underneet all unsecure and Gabes "coolness" with his inner turmoils...realy enthralling development.

please continue.

I’ll stand by my answer from the previous chapter, but simplify it: I think Gabriel will elevate Ezekiel. I’m getting a little hung up on the biblical references as we’re given Utah as a background. I love that “geezus” was a word in this chapter because that’s where my mind keeps going: Jeezus, this is so good …