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Click hereI question him with my eyes before he smiles, taking my face in my hands and kissing me gently. "Sleep until 8; that's two and a half hours from now."
We dry off, share a few kisses, and Gabriel is on his way out the door before I can confuse myself with what all of this means.
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A/N: Let me know what you think, as always! The next chapter should be coming sooner than most.
QOTC: What do you think is next for Zeke and Gabe?
- COMMENTS
dnsontnover 2 years agoI’ll stand by my answer from the previous chapter, but simplify it: I think Gabriel will elevate Ezekiel. I’m getting a little hung up on the biblical references as we’re given Utah as a background. I love that “geezus” was a word in this chapter because that’s where my mind keeps going: Jeezus, this is so good …
Anonymousalmost 7 years agogreat story
I love the characters, so unexpected and refreshing, with edges and flaws.
it turns me on
Zeke is not smooth, I love his bitchiness, it makes him interesting although he is underneet all unsecure and Gabes "coolness" with his inner turmoils...realy enthralling development.
please continue.
hero101almost 8 years agoAuthorThere are two parts after part 5 and more parts coming soon.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoCum on be our hero101 and give us the next chapter, pretty please
Anonymousabout 8 years agothis story is a gem in literotica. Zeke is my fav character, his reflection and train of thought is so hilarious, yet I can relate to him at some points. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. Plz don't drop this <3
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI literally can't wait for the next chapter anymore. Love your work
Anonymousabout 8 years agoOne of my favorites. I love the writinv, and that there is substance around the sex. Of course I shouldn't expect that from a smut website, but it is great when it's there. I can't wait for a new update ahhh
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI`m not doing comments often, but when I do: The story is absolutely amazing.
I am getting so immersed in the characters you created and I find myself checking every week if a new update is out!!!
Keep on going! I love this story with Zeke and Gabe and honestly... who doesn`t ship them?
Please keep updating.
Sincerely, your anonymous fan:)
hero101about 8 years agoAuthorYour comments are always appreciated. I'm glad you all enjoy this story and I hope you stay to see Zeke on this journey. Thanks!
Hutchison12about 8 years agoJust loving this story so much, the journey Zeke is on and sorting out his messed up feelings about himself and others is just great.. Can't wait for the next thanks
Anonymousabout 8 years agoReally enjoying this unfolding story. Gabe is terrific and if Zeke loosen up on control he could very, very happy for the first time in his life.
Anonymousabout 8 years agowas he being nice and sensitive or is it too gay for Gabe. Like the first time gay for Gabe twist, didn't see that, that leaves a lot of angles which this story can go. Sounds like Gabe is questioning himself, he like zeke, but can he love him and be with a man fulltime. Zeke could be in for some heartache while Gabe figures this out............
Waiting for the next chapter
