All Comments on 'Work and Play Pt. 08'

Thank you for continuing the story. I hope the next chapter will come soon, but I'm happy as long as it will come. I'm also happy with the way the characters are evolving and that hopefully Clay will get what's coming to him and we won't need to see him much longer.

Keep up the great work and hope to read more from you soon.

what keeps me on the edge of my seat anxiously is zeke's rambling and talking his thoughts, just when you think he's going to blurt out their relationship he holds it in, and I know this is hard for him to do I like this aspect of his character, his thinking aloud,and crazy insecurities, ididnt at first but its grown on me.

Like when with the cops and he refused a lawyer im just thinking he's going to say something and it will all come out.

I like that you're giving more meat to gabe, Shannon and Grayson's characters and how with their support Z will face his fears and be loved when he tells everyone the real him

cant wait for next chapter

I was so happy to see another chapter of this story. Such an amazing read!! Thank You for updating!! It was worth the wait!!

welcome back your story gets better and better

It made my day to see this next chapter! I went back and re-read the whole thing just to refresh my memory and can honestly say it's one of my favorite stories on this site. So excited to see how the rest of this story goes.

This is easily my favorite chapter so far. All of the suspense and storyline was amazing.

I don't use this site often so when I checked it tonight and specifically looked up your username (to see if you had started another story since I assumed you had given up on this story over the summer) I was so excited to see you had continued writing this!

Don't make me wait until 2018 for part 9 though!

This series is one of my favorites! As one of the other readers commented, this is my favorite chapter. Love these two and cant wait for more chapters.

First of all, happy new year!! :) I hope you spent a great holiday season.

And then, thank you so much for continuing your story! I missed the boys a lot! Can't wait to know how it continues.

I was void for a while so thank you all for still reading this story. I'm so happy I found time and inspiration to update, and I hope you can all read (and maybe recommend?) this story until it's finished.

Thanks,

hero101

please continue...

I hate getting into a good story to find it's not been completed or updated in months!! Come on! Finish it

It's so good! Want a happily ever after for gabe and Zeke

I really love the characters and this story. Please update soon!!

the story deserves an ending..

I promise! I have lots of time now. Very happy about the popularity of this story!! Next chapter is halfway done :) thank you for being patient, or not patient :D

To see your comment about updating. I find myself vascillating between empathy and frustration with Zeke that he can't get out of his own way and be happy. I love that your writing can invoke that in me. Anxiously awaiting more of your writing talents :) :) :)

I I've this story and the characters! Kids are out of school. Ow and I need my escape and this is a great one! Can't wait for the story to continue!

I love these two! I'm dying for the next chapter to come!!

waiting for an update..pls make it soon

Please make an update or a reply real soon pls pls

A story dis good needs an ending.come on, i need some closure...have been stalking dis one for quite a few months.would love to hear from you...

I have re-read this story so many times

Anxiously waiting for what next

Please please write soon

Was a very good story..dead end!!

I can’t stand it when a story gets half way though a chapters long novel/novella and then it just falls off with out warning! If you’re going to just flake and not finish it why even start? It’s incredibly annoying to those who have put the hours upon hours into reading your work... if you publish somewhere else (free or pay to read) tell the readers instead of leaving us hanging and if you don’t plan to finish then why even start... or at least have the decency to say “never mind I’m not going to finish this... move along” cause this just falling off shit gets real old on here!

Please finish I need closure, does gabe return?

I truly hope you’re still writing and haven’t given up on this, love these two. So much passion it makes my heart race. You are very talented at conveying zekes anxiety and insecurity. The scenes with clay are so frustrating, but true to character. Glad he finally spoke up and so relieved that Gabe knows and can hopefully help zeke get out of his head. Please post an update soon!!

Loved this story and it has so much potential!!! I really hope you finish it. Com’on com’on!!

Couldn't stop reading the story!! Need more! Please

It's been awhile since you have written anything in this story please please finish it

Really hoping for an update on this! I always come back to check and would love to know how it ends for Gabe + Zeke

The story you crafted here is so beautiful and well done! It’s 2020 and I just discovered this story now and am haunted by your words saying the story was far from over but hasn’t been updated in so long! I would love to be able to read more of Gabe and zeke’s story <3

I just found this story and I would LOVE to read more about them. There is just something about your characters that are so completely loveable and relatable, especially Zeke.

Can't wait for more to finally come.

You're writing is really good. I usually run from interracial stories (I read some fucked up stuff, my mostly nonexistent faith in humanity was questioned), but I here I don't have to question whether or not Zeke sees Gabriel as human. Sadly enough I find that refreshing. But hey if this story is truly dead just keep writing writing in general.

I’m hoping for a conclusion to the story please!

I read this story when It was first published and being updated it's got a great plotline and characters. Definately one of my favourites on here. Every few months I'll check back in on it but sadly it looks like it's being discontinued :(

Huh. No QOTC. Intense chapter. As with each and every: Five Star stuff