All Comments on 'Work Experience In Spain'

As the first of a series (to judge by the “to be Continued”) it is a bit harsh to form an opinion on just this one but it doesn’t make me want to eagerly look for the next installment.

The story was a bit wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am but for a first try O.K.

I found the grammatical errors disturbing, every decent text program has s spelling check function and I use mine a lot, try it.

Tygre137

Hello Gandalfwizard,

the story has good element in it, but it would improve a lot, if you ad more details, what do the persons do, what could they feel, what did you feel, what helps the reader get lost in the story?

The story has to be dense and I think it should be a little longer.