All Comments on 'Work Friends'

"It began with Dan saying something about Rene's big heavy tits probably holding her down so she couldn't get out of the bed this morning."

My question - Who îs "Rene'"? (Some tighter editing/proofreading would catch things like that).

Thanks for bringing that to my attention. I've attempted to submit the edit to fix this but I'm having trouble submitting.

Not that I have problems submitting ;)

But something has started happening with spell checking and it's been a bit of a faceless brick wall I can't get through. I can't even tell if it's a human or a spellchecker program. I will try to have it fixed soon.

Good premise.

But once sex started it was too fast. Too automatic. Too mechanical.

When he was loving her asshole, it needed to be step-by-step. Touching. Feeling. Fingering. Long before his tongue got involved.

Maybe she'd never had her asshole played with/licked/loved. It'd be nice to slowly take her through the process with diaog about how she was enjoying it and wanted him to continue.

Four stars.