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All Comments on 'Work Wife Turns Mistress'

by Seamus007

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TheKrrakTheKrrakabout 7 years ago
Incongruous

This story was written with the vocabuary of a 35 year old but the imagination of a 13 year old - just can't get into the story at all.

2/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A good first story

I look forward to reading more of your work

Seamus007Seamus007about 7 years agoAuthor
Sorry for the lack of inagination

I look forward to writing more. Sorry for the lack of imagination. Good feedback thoughbas thisnis my first story ever published.

cruiser_2015cruiser_2015about 7 years ago
Good start!

A good start with your first story! Good theme. Keep posting, but develop your style!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice short story

Many can relate to title of this story

nortythortsnortythorts8 months ago

I liked this. Don't be put off by negative comments. Good first attempt and write more.

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