All Comments on 'Working at the Diner'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sp??

dragged not drug.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SPELLING

Dessert not desert.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good job

Not bad. Wish you would have included both girls getting it from behind. Hope you write about the bikers return.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

If you're going to write a story about DESSERT, as in the treat that follows a meal, PLEASE be sure to spell it correctly!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Very sexy. More please.:-)

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