All Comments on 'Working for my Father-in-law'

Up until then, it was okay.

.............fucking your father-in-law without having the obligatory "your son in neglecting his wife" conversation just doesn't do it!

Great premis, well told. Need more chapters to finish the story arc.

In the end the FIL should knock her up.

I loved it! And the build up was working great, but it seemed rushed and the ending suffered in my opinion. Their coupling could have almost been an accident. I would have loved a long form seduction. Start with flashing and flirting. Then the lunch dates and drinks after work. Maybe later they could cross the line with some light petting. "Oh! Look how big your arms are!" "You look so sexy my clients were intoxicated by you!,"

Keep writing because you instincts are hidden!

PS

I imagined J-Lo and Stephen Lang as the Stars!

I loved it I loved when he got rough with her ... He should have smacked her ass more... I would love to see more installments of this storyline... Keep writing!!!!!